The final crit form the first obstruction was on Tuesday, so my apologies for taking so long to get back to you. Over all I think the crit went fairly well. Our guest critics were Mr. Garrett House, a previous student of Professor Carranza, who took this class the last time he did the 5 Obstructions. The second was Professor Gail Fenske, a teacher here at RWU, I actually had her for a class last semester. I was the last to present. I started with how my building transformed form the original, then moved on to a walk though of the floors.
The first comment that they said was that it was a very believable and convincing as a project as a whole. The gird of columns was a little strong and that I should think about removing some, especially on the third floor to open up the kitchen dining and living areas. or maybe slimming them down a little. also to darken up my drawings a little and twist the pencil more. Then the crit was over. I don't if its a good thing to a bad thing they didn't have that much to say, but if they just want to talk about my drawing needing to be darker vs, my project sucks and its not understandable at all, I'm okay with that.
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